Still making amazing poetry, I see. I may have to put up something a little recent of my own soon! I haven't been on this site for years, but its good to see that your work has only improved. Keep it up!

The title tho long, was realy catchy and interesting.
there are so many thoughts in this poem,
some that touched me, some that lost me a little bit..it needs some organizing and a bit of editing, but i donu why it was down voted, cause this is a strong poem in content, and you had this inner flow which i enjoyed.

well done,
revise it a little
then its perfecto

5/5

Great poem bro