by Jenni Marie Oct 24, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Lips trailing kisses upon her skin, staring at his pretty face |
by Edward D Zurovec
Ahh, yes |
A good piece. I particularly liked the wording, and the images, as well as the emotions it created inside her. I personally, felt the piece got stronger as it went, and that the last stanza was the strongest. My favourite lines are the first two lines in the last stanza. |
by Jess
Great poem 5/5! |