Great poem 5/5!
I Really Enjoyed The Creativity!
Keep Writing!
Will You Please Rate And Comment One Of My Poems Too?
Thanks And Great Night To You!
-Jessi.

A good piece. I particularly liked the wording, and the images, as well as the emotions it created inside her. I personally, felt the piece got stronger as it went, and that the last stanza was the strongest. My favourite lines are the first two lines in the last stanza.

'She never meant to fall for someone else's guy
But she just can't help herself, normal rules don't apply'

Very well worded and gelled together.

Brad

P.S. PLease comment and vote on every poem you read.

P.P.S. Thank you for your comments on my poem 'Death to the Both'.

Ahh, yes
forbidden fruit is so bitter sweet!
So enticing, the trick or treat.
Never the Concious of the other,
only Conquest! Certainly flesh is
weak, but oh so desirable! Takes two
to Tango. Peace and Blessings