My dreams are stuffed and crowded with monsters
both human and beast
all with the light of cruelty in their eyes,
all with sublime and inescapable power,
all who smile wanly and dismissively
as I rage, rage, rage with all my will against them.

^^^omg..^^wow..i must admit for an opening , this is too deep..I love the wording.. its perfect! then. The adjectives ad the vocab and the way u used them actually was REALLY poetic and DEEP...love the repetition of rage..made an intense..

My dreams are swarming with monsters
who take far too long to die.
^this is very painful and really dark!

I want to smite but lack the stomach for it-
I miss every throbbing artery,
every bundle of nerves that would end this.
^^ i got such a bitter picture of someone suffering over here..a very bitter description thats worded in a perfect way

I stab and slice and crush and the monster succumbs,
slowly, so slowly. As the end nears
the blood washes the ground, coats my hands,
^^i am not sure but something felt wrong here..if u wana review..but i may be wrong at the same time..so Sorry just felt like it XD..
sprays my face, and
there is a sudden fear in the beast's eyes

^^^this is amazing..truly amazing..i just love the way u said..sudden fear in the beast's eye..u knw u gave me this impression about someone too mean and too bold ..facing his weakest moments..
, a
humanness that chills my heart, and I tearfully
wail my sorrow and my hatred as I plunge forward
for the final stroke.

^^oh..damn..amazingly worded! such a very gd imagination..I think the way this was written all together was really unique.
Not what we usually see. Besides it didn't sound like fiction..it have this face of humanity and how we humans are at certain levels..in certain places..for certain purposes .

Well done! 5/5 no bet admirable

I know this place.
The feeling life is critical to our humanity.
We Have to care;
the abyss magnetically beckons.
I am crying.
Thank you,
Poetry.

Thats a very dark write... about the monsters in your dreams ... but somehow I could relate it with the kind of tsruggle we do each day in our life... fighting away monsters of a different kind.
well written