Storm (Cascade)

by Sylvia   Oct 25, 2010


Black clouds saturate a murky grey sky,
turning day into night.
Thunder, lightning, storm brewing.

Rain falling, blown about by
howling winds, mimicking emotions as
black clouds saturate a murky grey sky.

Thoughts assault the psyche,
bringing darkness to a soul,
turning day into night.

No rainbows or pots of gold,
only sadness flooding the landscape.
Thunder, lightning, storm brewing.

Copyright © 2010 Sylvia All Rights Reserved

(Winner of Site Contest in Dark & Fantasy, Other Dark Poems)
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Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia, is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple. Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem. See the structure example below:

a/b/c, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C

To make the Cascade an even longer poem, use more lines in verse one. For example, if verse one has 6 lines, the poem must have seven stanzas so that each line of verse one is reused as a refrain in each following stanza (a cascading effect).

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You have done well with this form and each
    verse flows straight into the next one and I also like the images your word brings...good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //howling winds, mimicking emotions as
    black clouds saturate a murky grey sky.
    // wonderfully penned verses

    This was a clever write. loved how the emotions are described as murky grey sky

    congratz on the win. You did a great job on
    form... its new to me so will try it out :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I love this poem so much! :) Can really feel the storm brewing.
    Excellent Sylvia!

    P.S Love this form too :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Very nice, Sylvia. I was impressed with how well you were able to get this poem out and how it did seemingly flow like a cascade. Your word choice was great as well as your flow and the imagery was really good. I could see everything clearly. So once again great job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Sylvia,

    Well done, I was not aware of such a style as this. I must say that while reading I had to stop and ask, Didn't she say this already ?
    Once I read the explaination at the end it made sense. Thanks for sharing