by Jad Oct 25, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Darken clouds whisper rain, |
The rhyme & flow were rather well done, I liked the question in the middle of the poem - typically most writers place them in the beginning or the end of the poem...whereas here it was something new to me. I think it definitely makes the reader ponder over the question more before they move on to read the rest of the poem...clever idea. I know this probably isn't your best you've written, but I thought you did alright with it. |
Jad, |
by Lady Nik
Beautiful. Loved the first line. Great job honey :] Nik |
by Sylvia
Writer's block must be catching, lol. Seems like you are not the only one with it now. Good job. |