by Sunshine
I have told someone, that they are Very wise..your words reminded me of them ;)! |
by Jad
I really liked the overall idea of this poem. The many things you give the reader to think about. You made the depth of this poem very mature in some areas which is a good thing and also the way you worded the stanzas and in making them in three lines was great as well. The imagery was also wonderful in parts as it gave a clear description of what you wanted the reader to see. |
"mountains, oceans, redwoods, |