by Jackie Martinez Oct 26, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I thought I heard your soul whispering for me, |
That was so beautiful |
I enjoy these kinds of writes, I can relate to it so well, the only criticism I can offer is your use of "I" so often throughout the piece. You don't actually need all of them and it would clean up the lines a bit. Other than that, nice work. |
by Stuart
Wow, so much love. I lost my gf but she cut herself. I know what this pain is like, if you'd like to talk shoot me a message. Good poems love is a killer. |