What a magnificent .. inspiring song/write! Bravo Jim ! I enjoyed this poem emmensely and the sentiments expressed in it...

Well Done :))

I could apply each verse to things that I have done or had happen in the last few months and days, esp. not know what day it was today. Leaving stress and strife behind is the way to move forward in life, more difficult than it sounds. Enjoyed the entire poem. Well done.

This was a really good poem/song. I really liked the ideas you have given us to try and understand and where this poem is going. Also as Sylvia said, many people could easily relate to this. I really enjoyed this poem from the start to the end. Great job and keep writing.

Jim,
I will check this out on youtube. It has the lyrics for a top selling song. Many emotions, many feelings left unsaid but understood by the reader. As a poem I feel you tried to say to much in a couple of the stanza making it a forced read/rhyme. Sometimes less is more :-) Thanks so much for sharing