by Dreamofolwin Oct 26, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Sweep me away with your loving; |
That's beautiful! I love all your poems! And thank you for reading my poems. I love yours too. It is good being with the one you love...but definitely in the time of despair. When you are with the one you love all your troubles seem to wash away,but when you are far apart it seems as if all is lost. But even though you are far apart you can be happy all alone too. I know how it feels to be away from the one you love, but I am getting use to it this very second. "Even in the time of deep despair you can find happiness in the arms of the one you love." |
DOO, you swept me off my feet with this endearing love poem. The rhyme was not forced, nor the meter. This write left me jealous of your most certainly lucky lover :-) |
by Jad
This was a great poem that really caught my eye at first by the title which I do believe is fitting for the poem. I am also impressed by the amount of emotions you have poured into this poem and have made known. Your overall idea and repetivness in this poem was wonderful and great. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job and keep writing. |
Wow, so alluring & enticing a poem ! |
by Dreamofolwin
HaHaHaHaHa..... now Im def. smilin.... at myself! & my stupidity! HaHa. But glad Im not the only one too!! HeHe. Lolz |