Olwin, such a nice love poem, words the one we love would cherish and love to have whispered to them. Well done.

Thanks Sylvia :) Been a while since I posted, thought it was time I did! HaHa.Thanks so much for your comment :] it means a lot, Lol.

I am glad to see that I am not the only one that has a problem with their minds working properly today. lol

HaHaHaHaHa..... now Im def. smilin.... at myself! & my stupidity! HaHa. But glad Im not the only one too!! HeHe. Lolz

( I know I shouldnt comment here.. but couldnt resist :) HaHa.

Wow, so alluring & enticing a poem !
It made me want to lye awhile with my lover,
Just hold her & share the comfort of knowing we are both just where we want to be.....

One day I will & in the mean time I thank you for allowing me the pleasure of feeling what the future holds , I'm sure I will find as much comfort there as I once did. .5/5 ..Jim

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1038769

This was a great poem that really caught my eye at first by the title which I do believe is fitting for the poem. I am also impressed by the amount of emotions you have poured into this poem and have made known. Your overall idea and repetivness in this poem was wonderful and great. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job and keep writing.

DOO, you swept me off my feet with this endearing love poem. The rhyme was not forced, nor the meter. This write left me jealous of your most certainly lucky lover :-)

That's beautiful! I love all your poems! And thank you for reading my poems. I love yours too. It is good being with the one you love...but definitely in the time of despair. When you are with the one you love all your troubles seem to wash away,but when you are far apart it seems as if all is lost. But even though you are far apart you can be happy all alone too. I know how it feels to be away from the one you love, but I am getting use to it this very second. "Even in the time of deep despair you can find happiness in the arms of the one you love."