Darkness Crawls Around...

by Dreamofolwin   Oct 27, 2010


*This is a poem ( a Triolet) written about my fear of the dark as a child.

Darkness crawls around they call it night;
choking all my senses steathily...
Smothering my body causing fright;
darkness crawls around they call it night.
Frozen here I lie till mornings light;
my heartbeat pounding, deep inside of me.
Darkness crawls around they call it night;
choking all my senses steathily...

Unseen creatures whisper in my ear;
those that claim the fearful of the night.
My heartbeat quickens, footsteps ever near;
unseen creatures whisper in my ear.
Will they, shall they, ever disappear?
and calm my soul from horror and from fright.
Unseen creatures whisper in my ear;
those that claim the fearful of the night.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well done with this form Olwin!! The topic about darkness was well potrayed here..liked
    the read :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Fears of childhood can still haunt later on... I hope you have come over it :)
    wonderfully penned.
    //Unseen creatures whisper in my ear;
    those that claim the fearful of the night.
    // loved these lines .... coz I am still scared of ghosts :P

    enjoyed reading

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Thanks so much everyone for the kind comments :) Lol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Great poem Olwin, This one is simply amazing Everything about it was perfect , I'll be coming back to read this on occaision
    5/5...Jim

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Night time can be scary for us all. Olwin you have done a very good job with this, the message as well as the form.