by Lemma Oct 28, 2010
category :
Life, society /
other
Undress your costumed phrases, |
by Lonely Rider
//For sometimes words that hurt us, |
by Jad
I am really impressed by this poem. I love the personification you have given to words and how you write with a maturity that many people do not write with. The metaphors you used in this poem was really good and like everyone else I was getting the truth will set you free thing. Anyway you did a great job and keep writing. |
by Ingrid
From saying not what we mean, |
The last stanza was probably the most powerful, thee was a few lines that didn't really click or make sense with me, but overall the meaning did get it's way across rather nicely at the end. I thought the rhythm & rhyme were both excellent...you did rather well, I'm glad I discovered this. |