by Jess Oct 29, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It Is To Hard To smile, when I Just Want To Fall Apart. |
by Paul Gondwe
Wow.another great poem from u.. |
by Lynnea
Written beautifully with obvious pain and hurt. Overall this poem is awesome(: |
by ana
OH MY GOD.. I am in love with this poem.. this is so emotional and your letting out all of your feeling. i relate with this poem so much. Try not to hide so much. talk about it with someone you can trust. I'm always here! <3 |
by Lady Nik
I think this one was better than the first one I read. Your imagery and diction was stronger although making every word start with a capital letter was confusing. But that's just me I guess. Another good poem, I can relate. Keep it up Nik |
Very good poem, very emotional and relatable which is always a good thing, the rhymes were nice. Stay strong well done |