Smiles of a Summer Night (Cascade)

by Lonely Rider   Oct 29, 2010


Radiating through violet shadows
resplendent rays of moonlit charm
Smiles of a summer night.

Velvet moss on pavement grey
elegant shimmer of crystal stream,
Radiating through violet shadows,

Maple adorning colors of Fall,
bedecking a world, still and calm,
resplendent rays of moonlit charm.

Butterflies engaged in spirited plays
Gently rings the memory bell, like
Smiles of a summer night.

* Written for a Title Contest
** Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia, is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple. Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem. See the structure example below:
a/b/c, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C
To make the Cascade an even longer poem, use more lines in verse one. For example, if verse one has 6
lines, the poem must have seven stanzas so that each line of verse one is reused as a refrain in each following stanza (a cascading effect).

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  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Everyone has a specialty, something they are a touch better at then other. For you it's the imagery you add to your poems, the reader feels like they are there
    Excellent

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow. The imagery in this piece was so powerful and refreshing. I loved it. Every word was creative and brought this piece alive for me. Very nice work dear :] Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Smiles of a summer night indeed as fall makes its appearance. Nice images of that night. Good job with the form.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    What a refreshing poem. I loved how you did the form and it indeed flowed like a cascade. The imagery also in this poem was really nice as it gave the reader something to imagine as they drift through the poem. You have done a wonderful job with this form and I hope to see many more from you. Great job and keep writing.