A day in my life

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Oct 30, 2010


A day in my life

I open my eyes to a sky of blue
dotted with puffy white clouds.
Air of the unknown cradles me,
embracing me with expectation,
fear, and hopes of wonderment.
Each road leads to new beginnings
where destiny takes the wheel of venture.
Will the crossroads lead me to unknown
danger, mayhem and destruction
Where people laugh and have fun in
the misery and discontent of others.
Or will I walk into a new dimension
where others matter and are lifted from
the depths of poverty and vanquish

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  • 13 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Another well-written piece by you, hun. ^^
    As I said before the improvement is very apparent. It seems like your style has gotten more unique and perfected in your newer works.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is simple but well written. Nice job. The imagery is nice and the word choice is amazing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    This is such a beautiful piece. You worded it so well. :)
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely crafted bro, it totally speaks the adventurous life that you are living right now. Well I guess the unknown road will lead us to endless full of surprises...be it fun or dangerous, either way it comprise the journey that we are ready to take.great work

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //Air of the unknown cradles me,
    embracing me with expectation,
    // yeah we wake up to uncertainities of each day... but our optimism keeps us going :)

    //where others matter and are lifted from
    the depths of poverty and vanquish // very thoughful... aren't we all searching for one such dimension.
    well written.

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