by DeadSmileyFace Oct 30, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Just Cause My Heart IS Broke, |
by Jad
A straight forward poem that cut straight to the message that you wanted to get across and I was impressed by how well you did. This poem has a lot of emotions running though such as love and pride but all in all you gave its depth. Great job and keep writing. |