Winters Long Nights

Setting of a scene of a winter night. You have given a good introduction describing the mood as well as the surrounding..good job!

Lingering nights
beckoned by the pale moon
shines with a eerie glow,
piercing earths darkness.
WOW.. JAD..this is a very strong poem..the most thing i love about this..is the title..i am a maniac of winter!

the wording is do damn strong..amazing pictures..perfect expressions..very poetic.
VERy deep..incredible flow

Life in the forest
shuttles in their homes,
mesmerized by cascaded white

^^^ u took my breath away with the amazingnes of these words...it's just fantastic..
poetic..flawing ..
very DEEP..

The silence of night is broken
as a wolf resounds his cry,
^^^i was actually able to hear the cry
of a wolf..amid a dark winter night..a
very scary yet steepy image..
gave me goosebumps

trying to overcome and endure
Winters long nights.

^^^very strong..i did not EXPECT..

which is excellent..

5/5

'a' in the first stanza should be 'an'. This poem was excellent, you incorporated the senses in a unique way, I could definitely see and hear everything I read. I also loved the title, I thought that worked really well with the poem as a whole.

Absolutely beautiful and deeply surreal while reading, this was a touching nature write where you went over and above the expected descriptions, and imagined something new at night. Thanks for sharing.

God bless!

~MaryAnne

//shines with a eerie glow,
piercing earths darkness//
I love the picture of errie moon and the dark night... sounds beautiful to me :)
womnderful write... lovely descriptions of a long winter night... the imagery wolf's cry in the last stanza ends it very well.