by Michael D Nalley Nov 1, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Art trapped in a restless mind |
You have conveyed a poet's intent/purpose perfectly. The flow and rhyme was absolutely flawless. Definitely one to add to the favourites list. Well done. (: |
by pixie
This is absolutely true if you don't mind me saying. Great job |
I loved how you made the striking comparison between "art trapped in a restless mind" to "unwritten poetry". Very delicate lines that conveyed simplicity- the ingenious flow, I have missed reading your work, it always hits home for me. Thanks for sharing valued thoughts from your mind, keep writing always more. |
Very nice work Michael. It flowed nicely and and captured, I think what it is to write. Very well done. |
by Hurtingsoul
I like the fact that you didnt have to write much to describe the inner workings of a poets mind. sometimes its just a complex simplicity. very well done. |