Good job on the form I found that this poem was well written and went right with the form that you were trying. I love the questions you ask to the moon and also the very style of how you wrote this poem. There was also some nice imagery in parts of this poem as well. Great job and keep writing.

Nice job with the form and I am so glad to see you doing forms. (smiles) Asking the moon questions and just sitting, gazing at the moon brings you peace is a good message. Well done.

Interesting form... and its new to me.
/Oh midnight moon that shines up high;
against the night's dark canopy....
// loved the picture painted here ... beautiful.
well written poem.

Oh sweet Irish lady you didn't miss a beat with this short but awesome poem.
xox

I am now seeing this form everywhere and it inspires a lot. I love the connection and relationship you had with the moon, as if it was your brother, just creating peace between the two of you. Quite delicate scene you have given off, I hope more come upon this illuminating gem. Thanks for sharing, God bless you fellow poet!

MaryAnne

The moon is like a sanctuary of peace where
we forget all our pains as we immerse in its beauty..very nicely written :)

Well done nice flow and wording.