by WakingFreedom Nov 2, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You laugh at me because I remain who I am |
by Jad
You have done a wonderful job with this poem though the above comment should some of the areas that could be changed. Anyway I was really taken in with this poem as you did get across the message you wanted us the readers to get. Your flow was descent and also your word choice was great as it added to the depth at which you pull in the reader. Great job and keep writing. |