by kelleyana Nov 2, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Something about him that becharmed my every attention. The very sight of him makes me feel vulnerable, and secure enough to surrender to his love without fear. It's like he carried warmth that completely enveloped my heart. Closing my eyes, I used my mind as a tool to remind my spirit of this wonderful being that fulfilled my every dream. |
by Ben Pickard
An excellent piece of writing. Very emotive. |
Wonderful Write of Love, Kel. Excellent!!! |
by TowerDreamer
A spellbinding poem of such beauty that captures the essence of being completely in love with someone. Magical! |
by Sylvia
Full of passion and emotion, like a letter to your loved one. |
by Jad
What a heartfelt piece you have put up for us and I was really amazed on how good this poem actually was though it is not in a set pattern to say or plot. Anyway you have poured your emotions out on this poem and the power of it is overwhelming and I really was drawn in by this pull you present in this poem. There were also parts that were somewhat descriptive and that was good as well. The only things I didn't like about this poem was it really not being in a more strict stanza but I know that couldn't be help from the way you wrote this poem. Anyway you did a great job. Great job and keep writing. |