I would have to disagree with britt. sometimes you need to say a bad word to fully express that one emotion. i cant believe there arent more musicians like you. those lyrics are truly great i wish i could hear you sing them. but either way it was very well written.

HS

This is the first poem in a WHILE that I am giving a comment on, but I really enjoyed this =] The chorus "Don't chase the world and lose your soul
Just say the word, I'll take control
As my mother always told me, the old adage goes
Wisdom's just a little more precious than silver and gold" is just so brilliantly written =]
Good job.
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