This was very powerful for me and I find it easy to reflect on my own life in it. I like your choice of vocab and think you have done an excellent job with this piece. A pleasure reading it.

I cut my sorrow open
and let the black glass
smooth yet shaken,
carve a grievance

^ Love the opening

Wow...what a powerful piece of poetry :] I loved and I mean loved your imagery and diction. It's been awhile since I've seen someone use both so well and you my dear have done that. I loved how dark and gloomy this was. I enjoyed every line and I hope to read more from you soon. Please keep writing :] Nik

I thought this was beyond the scope of talent, it showed just a glimpse of what you are able to do.
A good dark poem isn't really easy to write people tend to follow the same path of horror. Excellent job, I enjoyed each word

Woah, I was overwhelmed by the power of your words and also the depth in which this poem went. The great descriptions were wonderful and how you described writing a poem was simply amazing. I really enjoyed reading this poem as it gave me a different view on writing. This is by far I think the best poem I have read by you. Great job and keep writing.