A Small Cut Could Be So Deep

by PinkyPrincess   Nov 5, 2010


You cut me deep,
And made me so weak.
You cut my skin,
And pulled my heart.
Then you tore it apart.
And threw it at me,
So violently.
I tried to put it back together,
But it's as sensitive as a feather.
I cried and sunk to my feet,
No longer feeling my heartbeat.
I could feel myself dying,
There was no point in trying,
Because I was already dead.
The second he pulled my heart, it bled.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Colm

    This was very vivid and the pain you felt is clear and obvious here. But it does seem a little forced to rhyme in my opinion, which hinders it from becoming a very good poem. But the emotion couldnt be more clear and strong!

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    O MY God this poem is a full of pain... the pain reflects in your every word..... such a sad poem..5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I have to admit these were my best 2 lines :

    I cried and sunk to my feet,
    No longer feeling my heartbeat.

    ^^I just love these more than the other.. because they did not sound forced.

    your pain and heartache is pretty crystal clear; but you forced the rhyme when you didn't have to. sometimes when u leave it unforced it touches the readers deeper especially when it gives a clearer message.

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