Austin, I get the message of your words but have to say, you will never be forgotten. Nice work.

A great write! This was an imagery filled piece, and I love your choice of words here. It has pain and sadness stamped all over it. A beautifully crafted piece. well donee!

Your talent is showing again. Excellent piece of work filled with many changes

You can definitely feel your sadness in this piece, I thought you did an excellent job.. loved when you said that your words were written yet forgotten, like Sylvia said that will never be the case...but I liked the line! Keep writing.