The transition of one season to another is like a death to one, birth to the next. You have done well with winter leaving and spring arriving giving us images of flowers amongst the remaining snows. Good job.

Very very lovely work! im not a big fan of poems about nature, but you made this one very enjoyable to read. Once again, amazing imagery! well done

A Wonderful Rispetto Austin, with great rhyme and meter :) Loved the winter theme :]
Have never heard of a Heroic Rispetto before! Now you've given me something to muse upon ! HaHa. Thankuu :)

... ( Im away to look up the form! HaHa)

Keep penning your Marvellous writes :]

Nicely done. I commend your talent and ability to try new forms. The makings of a great poet

Never seen this form before but like always you did a wonderful job with it. Very lovely images :] nice work Aussy. Nik

Wonderfully portrayed, such an impressive and beautiful form you have united with here. I relished the seasonal theme and your ability to leave the reader somewhat awed in every way.

God bless you and take care.

MaryAnne

You're so good at nature poems, another wonderful write from you. You always do an excellent job of portraying the seasons through your words, a nice glimpse of spring here.

Because of the iambic pentameter this seemed a little forced, when read out loud, but nevertheless you did very well on this!

while the ever biting wind blows:
spring breathes again ready to mold

^^
I like how you personify the seasons, it gives such a fairy- tale like touch to your poem.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

I like how you set the picture of winter's feel and bringing back a fresh breath of spring into the read..I like that transformation..well done with the form!!