Comments : If I Opened My Heart To You

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    Well done, I like it because it flows nicely, but more importantly as a reader you can feel your emotions.

    "I was just too afraid to
    really let you in my heart.

    I'd tell you that i always cared
    from the top and bottom of my heart"

    The only thing I would change would be to not have heart twice, that close together.

    aside from that, great read:)

  • 14 years ago

    by OmniLotus

    Whe i read this i texted my gf how much i loved her. =] thank you