by Chris Nov 5, 2010
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
This is my life and my life alone |
by Silent Girl
I can feel this poem i know how you feel :) 5/5 |
by Silent Girl
Good way to express your feeling's i feel alone in life |
by mira
Love it;) |
by Love Panda
Loved your choice of words, especially in the last stanza, really woke my creative soul. To be honest when i first started to read this poem i thought it could probably be used as a song, had that kind of singing rhyme. I deffinatly agree with Beautiful Chaos, this can be taken so many ways, gets you to contemplate every angle, a really good write, good for you. IBE |
I think people could look at this from many different angles and apply it to their life. I was not fond of the last line of the first stanza, I think it was the repeat of "way" but a very powerful write. Good work. |