The Sun

by Kuro   Nov 6, 2010


You are the light of my life
Blinding me with love refreshed
Positive life energy
Grown to a new beginning

Breaking through the cracks
Clarifying vibrantly
Removing the darkness
Buried deep down in my soul

Shine your light upon me
Don't leave me in the dark

~~~based of the tarot card "The Sun." ~~~

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  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The inspiration may have come from a card,
    but your words are beautifully put together
    brining out the beauty of one who is in love..liked the read!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    BBBBBBBBBBEEEEEEENNNNNNN
    I loved it...amazing word choice..
    very deeeep deep poetic wording.

    I love the ending so so much..and ur opening lines had this..uumm what to call ? CATCHY..tone..

    loved this one..as much as i love al u work..

    sweet love..five out of five!

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Simple with out the complex cliche"s nice piece of poetry

  • 14 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    Like a seed in the ground I felt like warmth and light had awakened my soul; giving me the strength to push upward...like a blade of grass emerging. Thank you for taking me there!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Very simple and beautiful. Nice work dear :] Nik

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