Comments : Knight Of Swords

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Reminds me of the quote, The pen is mightier than the sword. The last two verses pull the entire poem together for me. Truth is apparent, it is the lies that need to be exposed. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Rain on their parade
    To reveal the truth
    The world is cold
    Even to the youth

    *That stanza is soo true Benny. Anways this was a very insightful piece and I'm glad I took a look at it :] keep up the good work dear. Nik*