Once again a really good poem, it flows really well and is quite emotional, very enjoyabel ur a great writer keep it up!
5/5

Thats a wonderful write... I loved the fantasy and mystery kind of imagery here... beautifully worded.

Great wording in this piece, I like how you described both yourself and the significant other.

Always capitalize your "I", that is my only suggestion:)

Well done indeed:)

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