Comments : Home is where the Heart is...

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    I enjoyed it. I especially liked the last verse. It hurts to read it, because I feel your pain, but it was incredibly well written.

    "It will get better, don't you worry"
    I've heard this shit over and over
    "Just keep your head up Christiane,
    it will soon all blow over"

    I think you could play around with this to make it flow better and make the poem more powerful:)

    Good job

    Jessie