Full Ocean

by Poet on the Piano   Nov 7, 2010


The surreal embers
glow within us,
burning a sound
more sonorous
than beach drums
and moonlight flute

- our melody
underneath rain washed
stars,

falling with a kiss of promise.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A very short but to the point poem. I like these ones the best I would have to say as I am not a real lover of love poetry so poems that get straight to their message always settle well with me. For the poem, you had a depth which kept me thinking and also the word choice was great. The flow kept good throughout the poem as well. Great job and keep writing.