by Poet on the Piano Nov 7, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The surreal embers |
by Jad
A very short but to the point poem. I like these ones the best I would have to say as I am not a real lover of love poetry so poems that get straight to their message always settle well with me. For the poem, you had a depth which kept me thinking and also the word choice was great. The flow kept good throughout the poem as well. Great job and keep writing. |