In The Car [double senryu]

I'm a head banger so you see where that leaves me. Dig your imagination and how you write the opposing stanzas

Thats cool.. one should be focused while driving... coz the life of other's also matter..
well written

A twist to what a senryu is suppose to be but you still followed the guidelines. It was interesting to get two different view points on how you wrote this poem. Great job and keep writing.

Nice. Both ways of driving sound good to me, depends on my mood. lol

Really like this poem by you Ben. Ive done both.. drove the car with the music blasting! .. ( usually when Im stressed out, HaHa) and with the music off :) when I'm contemplative :)) Very good write! Well Done & Keep penning :]