I thought this poem was sooooo creative!!! How the simplest things in life we never really contemplate. I loved this one. I prefer tea myself. lol. Love a cup of hot tea at night. :) Nice write once again as always, your stuff is brilliance.

Woh.. Loved the adrenaline in this poem.. :) and also the calming effect! ,, Im away to buy some herbal tea :] haha. A great write! Well Done Ben :))

I like how you took two things from life and compared them, the good and the bad. Well done.

Well, this certainly puts a twist on poems that I have read. You did a wonderful job describing the drinks and telling how you could drink them. A unique poem that was pretty much flawless. Great job and keep writing.

Haven't heard about jasmine tea but i love drinking tea... another way to stay awake during office hours :P
wonderful write. Nice comparison made between coca cola and tea.

Give me a strong cup of coffee and I'm happy. cool write :-)