If the reader closes their eyes after reading, you can imagine those ripples. So few words to present this lovely image. Well done.

Wow thats a beautifulllll imagery...
the touch of dragonflies and the rippples in the stream ... loved it :)

I LOVE Haiku's!.. and this one is Superb. Loved the imagery :) Well Done TJ!

A wonderful Haiku that really got a beautiful image across in only three lines. Though many people may say this is a easy form it is actually a hard one to try and get a good image out of a couple of lines. Great job and keep writing.

This poem somehow personifies you:)

A very gentle en loving poem, innocent and sweet.

Well done, son

5/5 Ingrid xox

Your words paint the perfect image. Definitely doesn't take many words to express the beauty of nature...nicely done. Loved it.

I can see it.
Perfect.

I love the word ripple..i love the way u used it. this tiny piece..is not only natural..bur naturally poetic..
Perfect.

5/5

This is what Haiku is all about...in a few words images come alive...well written!

Most excellent my friend.

One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

Take care

Michael

Most excellent my friend.

One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

Take care

Michael

Most excellent my friend.

One just needs to spend time by the side of a river to see this spectacle. They dance and skim over the water's tension creating overlapping circles like a conductor waving his baton.

Take care

Michael

That turned out amazingly for a Haiku. I think most Haiku writers would hate you right about now. Haha.

5/5

-Heather