So Trite

by Beautiful Chaos   Nov 9, 2010


We could be cliche
Dedicate ourselves to forever
Fawn at the feet of love
Declaring it unbreakable

Cloak our hearts in immortality
Deathless souls
Chaining ourselves in eternity
Blind slaves

It is true
Love is everlasting
It is we, who waver
Who taint

Our weak forever's
They could end tomorrow
Love would go on
Unflinching

Too lost in words
To witness our own actions
Riding high
Falling short

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  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Our weak forever's
    They could end tomorrow
    Love would go on
    Unflinching

    ^
    How true,
    This poem is filled with pure honesty,
    The people who always claim to love forever,and it ends in nothing -_-'
    We'll done!

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