Lol..this is just amazing.. i have always loved ur sense of humor..and much more ur wisdom..
a very well written piece.. obviously with a very clear message mich.

I hope all fake people read this one :) and yes..those who u are testing still.!!

I just love the poem..a LOT..
thank u for sharing..provoked some thoughts..
deserves a nomination.

hope everybody read what's between your lines, rather than ur lines

5/5
Nana

There were a couple of ways one could interpret this poem. I was overall impressed with this poem and it came with such a great force from beginning to end, one doesn't really notice when he/she is reading it. The rhyme in some parts seemed a little forced but again in rhyming that can't be helped sometimes. There were many emotions in this piece and I found it all a beautifully painted poem. Great job and keep writing.

Honestly, I think this is one of my favorites. I JUST LOVE IT.