I really found this poem a fresh, new way to go about writing a love "story". You had wonderful imagery in parts and also the flow of the poem was incredible and I don't think that it ever got off track. I saw no force rhyming and I was pulled in from the start to the finish. This poem was different from most you have written and I was glad to see you extend your horizon on what and how you write. All in all, a wonderful poem with a catchy and nice story. Great job and keep writing.