Unknown Destination.

by Courageous Dreamer   Nov 10, 2010


With romance scripted
in emotive expressions,
heart printed lips -
(merely a temptation
towards an inferno of lust) -
lured us in by chance
to take the midnight train,
riding til' we reached
a destination unknown.

as we departed....

inhibitions suddenly
undressed themselves
exposing fantasies.

while veering to and fro
whispers were hushed
like railroad ties beneath us
passion hit its climax
along with satisfaction
releasing itself in whimpered sighs -
his honeyed breath
trailing in our tracks.

as our train came to a halt
we remained breathless
drizzled in twilight's luster.

we had arrived.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Wow .Great Job. Liked!

  • 12 years ago

    by varun

    Wow! wonderfully written.. really enjoyed reading it..

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very evocative and sexy! wish I were on this train! well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Looking back on this I remember sharing this with a teacher of mine...'
    it was for a challenge if I'm not mistaken?..right...
    We were Reading it...

    And I was like,
    Wait...waiit...'
    was the unknown destination an orgasm O.o...
    And she was like..
    'no need to say it out loud'
    Lmao...

    I remember this..I do,
    Heck I loved it so much I showed it to my teacher as I said already...

    I am amazed at how you turn something that
    would almost always sound 'naughty' into something extremely Classy and beautiful...

    And..ehmm Let me not say what I pictured in my mind...

    :x

    LOVE IT :)
    very...

    THOUGHT...provoking...

    -HUG<3.

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Interesting poem. Nicely worded and it flowed good. Wouldn't change a thing about it. I enjoyed reading it.

    5/5

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