A sensual poem with a lot of emotion in it. I like the way you wrote this referring to how a train departs and finally ends. Your creativity is really being seen in this poem and I am impressed as usual by your fantastic work you put into your poetry. I could only one day hope to do that. Anyway I really liked all the descriptions and the flow was right on with the poem from the start to finish. I am not a big lover of love poems but this poem was a different approach at the topic and I was taken away by it. Great job and keep writing.

I praised britts comment particularly cause she was encouraging you to write more love sensual poems... why ? cause this was a very very sweet piece..with so much passion..

the words u chose and how u worded it..was extremely passionate..
I loved the action in you word choice over here!

plus it was really strong,, VERY COHERENT piece, the ideas flowed so well 2gather .

You did a great job, and when I reached ur ending lines, I thought like..she did choose the right title indeed!

5/5

Congrats on the win!! a very sensual, passionate write... well done.

Wow!! I love this poem - it's so well-written! I love the story you've told.. the title of the poem caught my attention.. and I love how you expressed such feelings and how an unknown destination can be so beautiful and wonderful... It made me want to join this train and find this place! I love the creativity behind this poem... I really enjoyed it! You really deserve to win :) Great job!

Mmmm I love the passion you can feel as you read this. It is so much more powerful because of the way you blended it in to the overall imagery--instead of blatantly hitting us over the head, its much more subtle and delicious. :)

A great feel of time and rhythm to this poem and beautiful imagery. great work

You are amazing. I am going to strive to be just as good as you. I wish i knew you personally. having your insight would prove to be beyond value.

Interesting poem. Nicely worded and it flowed good. Wouldn't change a thing about it. I enjoyed reading it.

5/5

Looking back on this I remember sharing this with a teacher of mine...'
it was for a challenge if I'm not mistaken?..right...
We were Reading it...

And I was like,
Wait...waiit...'
was the unknown destination an orgasm O.o...
And she was like..
'no need to say it out loud'
Lmao...

I remember this..I do,
Heck I loved it so much I showed it to my teacher as I said already...

I am amazed at how you turn something that
would almost always sound 'naughty' into something extremely Classy and beautiful...

And..ehmm Let me not say what I pictured in my mind...

:x

LOVE IT :)
very...

THOUGHT...provoking...

-HUG<3.

Very evocative and sexy! wish I were on this train! well done!

Wow! wonderfully written.. really enjoyed reading it..

Wow .Great Job. Liked!