Comments : Just a Thought

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Sometimes we fill ourselves sadness with just a thought about love, life. What relief it is to realize that is was just a thought, not reality.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Third stanza, breathe should be breath... and the last stanza I thought was a little forced on the rhyme. Aside from that, you always have a unique, wonderful way of expressing yourself to the fullest...this poem was no different.