Let's End Here...

by TiredOfWaiting   Nov 11, 2010


Can Stead Back With You,
Now Is Impossible:
If I Can,
I Really Wish That I Could Forget You.
Forget You,The Only In My Heart!
I Thought My Dried The Tears Have Lost The Function Of Tears,
But Whenever I Think Of You,I Cried Again.
Oh~~~
Tears Really Are Endless.
Heaven Can't Be Better Then You Smile At Me...
Sorry...
Maybe Only Forget You,
Then I Can Be Free.
Since,It's Started From Here,
Then Let End It At Here....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Yeah what Jessie said and more. seemed like straight song lyrics, i think your overall sentence structure needs improvement, with some minor editing could be emotional. you should broaden your horizons with sentence structure, vocabulary and overall poetry, you have potential to be a great writer however. keep at it!

  • 13 years ago

    by TiredOfWaiting

    Thanks... :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    I think this could be very good, but it seems to me as if you left out words, or replaced them with words that don't make sense in that context.

    "Since,It's Started From Here,
    Then Let End It At Here.... "

    I really like the ending though, I think it's beautiful

    Jessie

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