Wow... this poem is so deep and heartbreaking... I love everything about it. I can really relate to it... the idea of falling and not being sure of having a safety net, someone to catch you... You express difficult emotions so wonderfully. Well done!

Yet it never is.
Maybe one day it would be

^ I would change would to will

But today it is not.
Maybe one day I would meet my

^And here change would to I'll

I thought it was great. very dark and introspective and something many of us can relate to. I don't even think that you need your final 2 lines.

How nobody seems to notice

^A strong ending point.

Great job.

Full of imagery and emotion. I've never read one quite this original, you worde it in your own style copying no one elses form. Excellent