by Poet on the Piano Nov 12, 2010
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I take a photograph of the unwritten horizon, |
by Jad
What a wonderful nature poem and I am impressed by your imagery and the great description you have given this poem painting a beautiful picture for us to read. Also the mixed emotions in this poem were nice as well and I found them to go right along with the poem and one last thing is the flow. I thought you did a wonderful job with the flow. Great job and keep writing. |