by Brittney Follett Nov 14, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Hollow eyes stare out from inside a mirror. |
by Decayed
The poem's tempo is captivating! |
Ilove the original formatting of this poem that delivered deep dark feelings with much skill |
Wow. this poem says alot, the structure was great, the description was great and it really showed alot about you and your stly as a write. i deffinetely enjoyed reading this and i think its very good how descriptive and expressive you are. great poem. 5/5 |
by Mello193
I think this is my favorite poem ever. this was amazing. the way you put in to words being controlled. how vindictive it is to control someone. this was amazing from start to finish |
A huanting wite that was very deep and creepy. I liked how you kept the flow going throughout the poem and how you kept the reader interested |