by Chris Nov 15, 2010
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I'm hearing voices in the voices |
Tip top really sir! very, very impressed! I would do the typical thing and quote and verse or something from your poem but all of it is gold to me and I genuinly want you to know this... (I don't often comment, read or take in other peoples stuff) I am very selfish with my work! well done old chap! do me a favour... read my 'Cower Odd' don't worry, you don;t have to comment or vote if you can't be arsed!' |
by Silent Girl
I hear voices inside my head sometimes :) |
by Kate
Love it. I like how you show the different sides of both voices. Very well balanced. Amazing |
by Xanthe
The title drew me in and the poem itself is powerful. I love how you put the "oh"s to make the poem flow effortlessly. It's a great piece :) |
by BlueJay
You bring up a very good point and I'm sure anyone would agree that they hear those voices in voices. Good job and this poem is so wonderful. |