A really good concept that I think a lot of us feel, or hear voices in voices. We're bombarded by do this, do that, don't do this, got to do that Everyone has an opinion, or demand, what if we just listen to our own inner voice..just ours. Right or wrong at least maybe we would keep our sanity
Brilliant theme

Beautiful stanza structures. Your word choice is really great. I like the flow and the feeling this poem gave off. It's a little spooky, but in a cool way :) great write!

You bring up a very good point and I'm sure anyone would agree that they hear those voices in voices. Good job and this poem is so wonderful.

The title drew me in and the poem itself is powerful. I love how you put the "oh"s to make the poem flow effortlessly. It's a great piece :)
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Love it. I like how you show the different sides of both voices. Very well balanced. Amazing

I hear voices inside my head sometimes :)

Tip top really sir! very, very impressed! I would do the typical thing and quote and verse or something from your poem but all of it is gold to me and I genuinly want you to know this... (I don't often comment, read or take in other peoples stuff) I am very selfish with my work! well done old chap! do me a favour... read my 'Cower Odd' don't worry, you don;t have to comment or vote if you can't be arsed!'