Love Is Poisonous

A straightforward poem that really gave me the idea of someone pretending to love someone and so the other person is being fed a poisonous love. That's my view on it but I'm sure that there are others. Anyway the poem was really good and I like the message you were getting across though I think a lot of people have had there take at this. You still seemed to add a edge to your poem. It also had a good flow which kept me on the poem from the very beginning to the end. Great job and keep writing.